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Friday, October 29, 2010

Research Paper outline

Thesis: In 2008, esquire magazine conveyed a well groomed, well dressed masculinity throughout their issues.

1- men should shave mor often.
a\ esquire magazine has various articles explaining how men should shave.
b\ what products men should use

2- Mens casual wear has evolved
a\ esquire magazine posted the acceptable casual attire in 2008
b\

3- Most famous men of 2008 were well groomed.
a\ Zac efron, Robert Paterson
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  1. Miss BNovember 1, 2010 at 5:14 PM

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  2. Miss BNovember 1, 2010 at 5:16 PM

    Your thesis, which is a claim thus far, works well for this outline. The order of your main points is effective as it progresses from grooming, to attire/clothing and male celebrities as models of this new type of masculinity. But you need to develop this outline much further and include specific examples from your primary sources which should follow the MLA format. In regards to grooming, think about what it means for men to shave? Is Esquire[italicized or underlined] encouraging a clean shaven look or 5 o'clock shadow or a full beard? You need a secondary source to explain why this new look is being promoted. Now in terms of clothing, here you aren't giving me much information to comment as you haven't actually said what is the 'acceptable attire for 2008'? In your last point, the mention of Z. Efron and R. Paterson is interesting as these are very young men. Why is GQ encouraging men to imitate teen boys/men in their 20s? Emphasis on being young and hip? Why? Secondary sources are needed to explain this emphasis on youth, little facial hair and possibly casual clothing. Is Esquire trying to turn back time and make men young again?

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